Teaser trailer second draft feedback

Below is the feedback my peers gave me on my second draft of my teaser trailer in class when they watched it. I will take on board the changes they have asked me to make as well as the positive comments about my trailer.

Second draft of my teaser trailer

This is the second draft of my teaser trailer "Out of Sight" which I have changed a lot from my first draft as I did not think I had put enough time or effort into my first draft. I have included more and replaced footage as well as adding sound, transitions and better inter titles.

teaser trailer first draft feedback

Below is the feedback I recieved from my peers on my first draft of my teaser trailer.

First draft of my Teaser Trailer

This is my first draft of my teaser trailer that I created on final cut pro. At the beginning it took me a while to learn how to use final cut pro so my first draft is very basic and dosent contain any transitions or sound.

Teaser Trailer I gained the most inspiration from

when looking at different teaser trailers within my chosen genre, the one that I had looked into the most was Changeling starring Angelina Jolie and John Malkovich. I found this trailer very intriguing and I liked the fact that it was based on a true story which was why I decided to have the same story line to mine as it would attract my target audience and meant I could have a number of various scenes showing all types of emotion and attitude.